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Print draft feedback and learner response

  Print draft feedback and learner response Feedback The cover is not far away – lots of excellent elements here. Strong central image, good consistent use of font/typography. Having the title obscured by the image is a classic magazine convention but perhaps a little too obscured? Main issue with cover is the cover lines and main flash. This is both in terms of how they are written and also text size – they need to be big enough to sell the magazine to an audience seeing it in a shop. In terms of the writing itself, the cover lines need to selling the magazine, not an advert for the TV show. Secondary images meet the brief – perhaps make more of them? The inside pages need more work to bring them up to professional standard / A grade. Go back to your research and make sure you are including the key conventions of magazine inside pages. Don’t be afraid of white space either! Font/typography and text size in general needs work on the inside pages. The Q&A feature is appropriate and

TV crime drama rough cut learner response

  Learner Response The scene on the hill works nicely initially but depending on where this three-minute extract will appear in the wider drama I’m not sure where it will go… in some ways this is more like a short film than a TV extract. How many more episodes are there? Where will the narrative go next? You don’t need to make the entire episode but you want the audience to have an idea of why they would want to keep watching. Check audio levels – the conversation on the hill is nice and clear but the levels jump around a little. See if you can smooth it out a little as professional audio is so helpful for a top level finish. The flashback scene works quite nicely – the reference to TV crime drama cliches is very postmodern ! I would look at the framing of the shots in this section and see if you can do anything in Premiere to improve this (OTS shots are difficult to frame though). WWW  Flash back scene works in terms of conveying a crime drama conventions Opening sequence adds int

Print brief research and planning

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Research and planning Front cover 1) Research TV listing magazine front cover key conventions. Find at least five examples of TV listings magazine front covers and post them to your blog. This will give you a good idea of the type of magazine you need to produce                                                                                                 2) Note down the design elements you notice in each front cover example you research and look for aspects you can use in your own work (e.g. camera shots, page design or cover lines).  Design  Elements:  Direct mode of address with the subject aligned in the centre of the page making them the vocal point. The  masthead is clearly evident at the top of the page in bold lettering, mainly a sans serif font. Images  surrounding the main image contain of 2/3 images; in size they are quite small so the main attention goes to the vocal point. In terms of the cover lines they are placed around the main image and not  overbearingly constricti