Print draft feedback and learner response
Print draft feedback and learner response Feedback The cover is not far away – lots of excellent elements here. Strong central image, good consistent use of font/typography. Having the title obscured by the image is a classic magazine convention but perhaps a little too obscured? Main issue with cover is the cover lines and main flash. This is both in terms of how they are written and also text size – they need to be big enough to sell the magazine to an audience seeing it in a shop. In terms of the writing itself, the cover lines need to selling the magazine, not an advert for the TV show. Secondary images meet the brief – perhaps make more of them? The inside pages need more work to bring them up to professional standard / A grade. Go back to your research and make sure you are including the key conventions of magazine inside pages. Don’t be afraid of white space either! Font/typography and text size in general needs work on the inside pages. The Q&A feature is appropriate and